Tuesday 4 February 2014

feedback

WWW

  • There are some good points, quotes and theories in here, but nowhere near enough and your lacking an overall argument
EBI

  • Your lack of research is keeping you at level3 and the only way to improve this through reading and adding more quotes
  • There is no clear argument running through the essay, what is your point?
  • very little focus on Topboy, I think we might need to alter the question
  • Poor written English is holding you back. You are struggling to offer formal academic language (Tone/style)
The level I will be aiming for in my second task will be a level 3, I think this is equivalent to a B

Five things I will do or change for my second draft that will help me get there 
  • I am feeling to alter my question so that my research will match my essay more, this will make my points that I have created more accurate.
  • I am planning to write in more formal and better English to improve my essay grade, I noticed that that I made many clumsy mistakes with my vocabulary making sound less formal and less academic.
  • I will be adding more research to my essay so I can add more footnotes and increase the size of my bibliography because there wasn't enough information.
  • I am going to link every point I make back to Topboy because I didn't show a lot of contrast before in my past essay
  • Finally I am going to introduce my quotes correctly and use the right content of punctuation, to make sure that my sentence structure is correct.  
Write a minimum three-point 'wish list' for the BFL Library trip - what do you specifically want to take away from the BFL in terms and issues, theories or particular sections of your essay
  • I would like to find more quotes that relate and link well with Topboy, to improve my paragraphs in each part of my essay 
  • I am looking to find some good historical text within the representations of black males in the past, this will help me improve my 3rd paragraph in my essay 
  • Looking for any representations for Desmonds 
  • Gerorge Gerbner - Cultural Theory 
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Tuesday 7 January 2014

Crtical Investigation Task4 Essay Plan

Working Title : To what extent does channel 4's Topboy reflects reflects the modern representations of black men in British media

Section1
Historical Context- Desmond's
Textural analysis
Issues/ Debates -
Theory-
Showing the contrast of Topboy and Desmond's (Roughly 300 words)

Section2
Primary text  - Topboy episode
Analysis of Primary Text
issues/debates- Media Effects
Theorys  - Genre Theory
(Roughly 500 words)

Section 3
Representations and stereotyping
New digital impact on TV feminism
Secondary text analysis - Luther

Section4
Current/ Future media Landscape for this issue
politics and economics
institutional issues
wider context

4A
Audience
Effects - I will be explaining how the audience believe the steriotypes shown in T.V programmes
-(Audience pleasures)
-uses and gratifications

Conclution
Read introduction !
My Hypothesis



Monday 9 December 2013

Critical Investigation: Task #1




Top Boy | Threats (S2 - Ep1) | Channel 4


This episode  uses lowkey lighting whilst they are shown in the scenes. This effect produces a strong contrasts of light and dark and creates dramatic shadows, this low key lighting effect connotes that the scene was going to have a serious emotion. It also connoted that there was some conflict in the air between the two characters Dushane and Sully .

Most of the actors in the series are black males and although people enjoy watching Topboy, they don't notice that this tv programme is making the audience have a negative opinion on black males round London. As you can see Topboy have made black males act as drug dealers, gangsters, gang-bangers and thieves, this is just making the audiences believe that the stereotypes of black males are true. This can affect many black males around London financially, meaning that it will be difficult for them to find jobs and careers they are interested in. 


The characters clothing shown in the trailer shows a variety of clothes such as tracksuit bottoms, big puffer jackets, hooded tops, air forces etc. The use of mise en scene on the clothing of each character connotes that the characters are going to be doing negative activities in the drama due to to the shots of the dark and thuggish clothing. This makes the audience aware of who are the trouble makers in the series. The trailer shows many shots of images of violent weapons such as guns and knives, also the trailer shows shots on drugs and weighing scales and shots of piles of money. This connotes that the series of Topboy is going to be mostly based around gun crimes, drug dealing and gang wars. This informs the audience that the series is going to be based around the urban and unfriendly parts of London. The series is based around peckam poor urban estates showing shots of local corner shops and cheap community markets, this is what you would normally see around the ubran areas of London. This connotes that the urban parts of London is unwealthy, however this is another stereotype of certain parts of London because sometimes its not always true.


The trailer uses Diegectic sound through out the trailer. You can hear dialogue from the characters in each scene, also you can hear music and other sounds that comes from a source that we would naturally expect that sound to come from. They sound in the background was called the 'SX woo riddem', it is a grime instrumental that was created around 2-3 years ago, it is very well known around London due to the fact that many rapper have produced songs on it.


The first shot shown in this episode was a close up shot Sully staring of a game of pool with a close up of the balls and Sully and his friend blured in thre background. This was an excellent way to enter the scene, it keeps the audience locked on to the scene because the sutle pool shot made such a loud sound , this connoted that this was going to be a tense scene. Another shot shown in the scene was a close up rotating 360 shot Sully that showed a high amount of lowkey lighting, they used a high amount of lowkey lighting with the close up to emphisise and show how irritated and annoyed Sully felt. The next few shots were many over the shoulder shots of a serious conversation between Sully and Dushane, this part of the scene used various over the shoulder shots to show the emotion of both characters; both characters emotions during the conversation were serious this connoted that the conversation was going to esculate into an argumen. The scene then stayed on an over the shoulder shot whilst Dushane sarcasticly left the building the use of blur on Dushane whilst he was walking out made the scene look tense and exciting. 


The editing of the trailer was done excellently. The pace of the trailers shots and images in the scenes were very quick, the use of the high tempo cuts will keep the audience entertained and on the edge of their seats. At the start of the trailer the camera showed quick cutting shots of images of the estate, the quick shots linked with the music as you can see the quick cuts were in time with the beat. However the camera showed quick shots of certain characters in the s and linked it with the tempo of the beat, this made the trailer look more exciting making audience want to watch more. The trailer showed many mysterious panning shots from behind some of the characters, this connoted that  there was going to be a lot of drama as the panning shots showed various panning shots of characters looking at something that the audience cant see, and we can tell that the character has a concerned emotion. The editing of the drug scene in the trailer was edited in a way to make the explicit substances stand out, you can tell by the way the room has a lowkey lighting and the drugs are bright white. This showed excellent contrast of both the colours, the use of the contrast made the drugs look more powerful. Also the trailer showed various panning close ups to show every characters emotion throughout, the panning style was either from the bottem going up or from the right moving to the left. The best edited shot of the trailer is the behind shot of the man in the car fully blacked out, and all you can see is police sirens flashing in the distance; that shot was very impressive it showed a lot of tension within the trailer. Further more the editing style made the trailer look superb it showed the same types of shots of the characters, drugs, weapons, violent activities with different characters showing different types of emotions













Tuesday 3 December 2013

Critical Investigation Task #3





Desmond's | Peckham's Sweeney Todd | Channel 4


This scene of Desmonds used highkey lighting throughout the whole scene, the scene uses highkey lighting to suggest an upbeat mood. this is often used in sicoms and comedies as you can see in this episode. High-key lighting is usually quite homogeneous and free from dark shadows. 

The clothing used in this scene was from round the late 1980's, everyone wore normal casual clothing. Such as, polo shirts, normally fitted jeans pulled accurtly on the waist, buttoned shits, religious clothing and blazers etc. This positive style typer of clothing connotes that all the moods in the room are calm and friendly this connotes that this show always shows a theme of positivity and happiness. This is an excellent excellent example of contrast shown between Topboy as you can see in top boy shows clothing such as tracksuit bottoms, big puffer jackets, hooded tops, air forces etc. This type of clothing has a negative image to the audience and also it shows that T.V prgrammes are making the steriotype about black males being intimidating harder not to believe.

Most of the actors in this episode are black obviously due to the genre on the series, the actors from Desmond's show great contrast with their personalities compared to Toboy. As you can see all of the actors in the barbers are encouraging Desmond's son to go UNI and are willing to help him get in, this shows that everyone in that environment was hoping for the best for Desmond's son. Desmond's present black people as kind and welcoming people you can tell from the way everyone has positive vibes throughout, this shows great contrast compared to to Topboy due to the fact that the black males in Topboy are presented ans violent, angry and dangerous people. This connotes how the genereation of black males has changed over the years and has become a crucial topic around London. The new generation of black males have influenced other audiences to believe the stereotypes from the way black males are true from what they say see on T.V, this image that black males create for themselves on T.V makes it harder for black males in London to find jobs due to the reputation that created; sadly making them financially unstable.

The setting on the film was in Peckham which is based in South-east London. The setting of Desmond's is ironic because Peckham is a very dangerous and rough area with a high criminal rate. This connotes that Peckham was a more calm area at the times of 1994 when Desmond's first started, this shows that the new generation of black males have a more wild and angry state of mind. However not all black males are like this, there are many black males that are successful in London such as Trevor McDonald.

Desmonds used diegetic sound throughout. Youcan tell by the way the sound comes from the world of the episode we are watching. It includes dialogue by the characters in the scene or other sound that comes from a source we would naturally expect that sound to come from.

The episode starts off with various wide medium shots, the used medium shots due to the fact that there were many people in the room have a group conversation this is an excellent way to show that everyone is involved. The shot then shifts when Desmond's son enters the barbers to a over the shoulder shot  in the angle of Desmond's perspective, the over the shoulder shot was used to show Desmond's son sons emotion; as you can see he had a serious emotion on his face this connoted that they were going speak about an important subject. The shot then changed to a medium range shot showing Desmond, his son and his wife, this medium shot to show the concerened emotion of Desmond and his wife towards his son; this shot make them look like a very close and loving family. Over the shoulder shots on from Desmonds perspective were shown various times. The next medium shot shown was represents the love and respect that Desmond and his son had for one another when it show Desmond offering his son a handshake and his son rejects the hand shake and gives his dad a hug with an apology. As you can see the younger generation on black males in London were brought up with respect for their peers and parents, this shows great contrast compared to round the times of Topboy, Topboy presents black males as people with no respect and no morals. Furthermore the episode showed various medium, wide range and close up shots throughout the rest of the episode








Tuesday 26 November 2013

Notes and Quotes

American Behavioral Scientist Page 1347
"identity is formed and renegotiated in everyday interactions with other Black
youth and how this negotiation is mediated through hip-hop culture"

American Behavioral Scientist Page 1347
"I examine the negotiation of Black youth identity as it relates to the process of inclusion and exclusion within groups"

American Behavioral Scientist Page 1347
"By examining the knowledge, behaviors, and necessary credentials in one Black
youth setting, I contribute to the discussion of cultural capital as it relates to race
and identity"

Hip-hop music exploded onto the music scene in the late 1970s, a significant
moment in African American history

“deindustrialization, economic restructuring and a resurgence
of racism”

Cultural capital is used to position people in a particular status hierarchy
among their peers

Most of the youth did engage in the performance of hip-hop at some level on a
regular basis

My assumptions about the popularity of these youth as well as their different
ways of performing also were evident from the performances of other youth at
the center.

Keepin it real

identity is formed and renegotiated in everyday interactions with other Black
youth and how this negotiation is mediated through hip-hop culture.

I agree with Lamont and Lareau’s (1988)
claim that cultural capital as a basis for social inclusion and exclusion is one of
the most important aspects of Bourdieu’s theory.

In the first half of the article, I review the theoretical contributions and
address the question of why hip-hop at this particular historical moment

Hip-hop music exploded onto the music scene in the late 1970s, a significant
moment in African American history.

The late 1970s marked a time when both
the Black middle and working classes had been moving out of poor, segregated
Black communities for two decades (see George, 1999).

It was rap music and particularly rappers’ ability to write stories from personal
experience that helped capture their target audience—Black youth (Rose,
1994).

Hip-hop’s use of samples from previous rhythm and blues (R&B) songs
as well as excerpts from political leaders such as Stokeley Carmichael and
Malcolm X also created a “text of freedom” for Black youth caught up in the
search for identity (see Gilroy, 1997).

The purpose of this struggle is to construct
a cohesive identity, which in turn, defines the community. Hip-hop, as
Lipsitz (1994a) suggests, “brings a community into being through performance

Cultural capital as a basis for exclusion from a social group is arguably one of
the more important aspects of Bourdieu’s theory. As Lamont and Lareau (1988)
suggest, looking at the relationship between cultural capital and the process of
inclusion/exclusion allows for a better understanding of the process of distinction
and social marking among groups.

AMERICAN BEHAVIORAL SCIENTIST

Furthermore, when discussing race and ethnicity, his
quote again suggests that a person’s identity (or authentication of that identity)
may not be based simply on personal attributes such as skin color but rather a
person’s performance of an intra-ethnic construction of that identity and music to express a Black identity to other youth.

As Blacksmoved out of
the inner city, drugs such as heroin and crack moved in. The introduction of hiphop
also marked the beginning of the Reagan/Bush era that governed for the next
decade and into the 1990s.

This combination of both individual and
group experience was prevalent in early singles such as The Sugarhill Gang’s
“Rapper’s Delight” and Grandmaster Flash and the Furious Five featuring Melle
Mel’s “The Message.”

This authenticity helped position rap music as the new voice of
young, Black America, epitomizing Gilroy’s claim that hip-hop is “the very
blackest culture—one that provides the scale on which all others can be evaluated”
(Gilroy, 1997, p. 85).

Theorists in the humanities and social sciences
have concluded that the production of culture is useful in determining how
meaning is exchanged between producers and consumers (see Gottdiener, 1985;
Hall, 1997).

Of particular importance in this dialogue are theways that consumers
then use meanings in relation to the construction of identity and community.

Several representations of the production of Black culture conclude that there is
an ongoing identity struggle within the Black community.

the group. John Hall’s (1992) examination of the process of distinction and status
rankings and markers within groups elicits a better understanding of the formation
of and struggle for collective identity.

Furthermore, when discussing race and ethnicity, his
quote again suggests that a person’s identity (or authentication of that identity)
may not be based simply on personal attributes such as skin color but rather a
person’s performance of an intra-ethnic construction of that identity.

her discussion of gender and
female identity, she claims that “there is no gender identity beyond the expression
of gender. . . . Identity is constituted by the very ‘expressions’that are said to
be its results” (Butler, 1990, p. 17). I use this definition in conjunction with
Goffman’s (1959) understanding of performance as part of everyday life to
explain Black youth’s performance of hip-hop, Black culture, and racial identity.

I intend to
explain one way that Black youth use hip-hop based on ethnographic data collected
from a teen center in Northern California.

some of the conversations I had with youth at the center. For instance, when I
asked Corey, a 16-year-old boy at the center, if he listened to hip-hop music, he
said, “at home, at school, I go to sleep with it.”

Similarly, when I asked Linda and
another girl what they thought of Black youth that didn’t listen to hip-hop, Linda
responded by saying, “They ain’t ’bout it if they don’t listen to it.”


“When I speak, people always ask me where I’m from,” she said. “I’ll say 'London,' but that’s never enough.”

Black men’s dismal college enrollments, disengagement and underachievement, and low rates of baccalaureate degree completion are among the most pressing and complex issues in American higher education.

Black men 'to blame for most violent city crime'... but they're also the victims








Sunday 10 November 2013

feedback !

WWW
Great looking presentation
Good use of media language (codes and conventions)
Use of images worked really well
Lowkey lighting, good use of media language
Good to see representations of women
Excellent discussion of representations
Good to see thought in your linked production and image anlysis
showed clear knowledge
more excellent language, synergy

EBI
Improve presentation skills (just reading notes from the desk)
Narrow your focus , so it can help you have more detail on ones of these topics
Lack of rehearsal

I liked the feedback that Mr Haysely gave me, there were more WWW's then EBI's. I enjoyed the topic i was talking about throughout. I need to improve my presentation skills  and narrow my focus so i can be able to get more information about the subject

Monday 4 November 2013

Year 13 Critical Investigation Proposal

Working Title 
To what extent does Channel 4’s Top Boy reflect modern representations of black men in British media?

Angle

In my critical investigation I will be talking about the portrayal of black males within British media , I will be using tv programmes such as Topboy and Adulthood to show some examples. I will be looking to see how and why black males are represented in certain ways.

My Linked Production 

In my linked production i will be using Krept & Konan - Dont Waste Time , I used this song because i believe it shows the example for representation of black males. It shows various shots and lighting styles through out.

MIGRAINE




Media Representations 

This video shows various representations of black males, for instance as you can hear in the video the chorus says "Police wanna stop me search my clothes" as you can see the artist Konan  is trying to insinuate that the police always think that males of the black race are always up to no good. This gives black males a negative image, i believe that black males are represented like this due to certain urban films and programs that people see on TV, usually when viewing urban programes or films black males usually take on the roll as the thug or the criminal this makes black males look violent and unfriendly.  This stereotype of  black males is not accurate as there are many  successful kind black men with well paid jobs that are not involved in gun crimes and  criminal activities.

Media Languages and Forms


There were many examples of mise en scene with the costumes. For example, in the music video every person was wearing the colour black, the use of mise en scene with the dark clothing connotes that they are all apart of a dangerous team that cause havoc. Another example of mise en scene is when the video shows various shots of big groups of black males in balaclavas, this connotes that they are planning to do something violent and crazy this makes the audience feel as if the age and race of black males are corrupted  because it looks like they live in a not so luxurious life.


This video shows many examples of mise en scene from the the props as you can see they are using bottles of alcohol in the music video, this connotes that the people in the video are intoxicated making it worse as they will act more angry and violent, this makes the audience fear the sight of black males whilst they are intoxicated.  Another use of mise en scene was the shots of the motor bikes, i can tell they used motorbikes to give the music video more of an edge and to make it look cool and interesting , as we can see this looks powerful, this makes the audience feel intimidated. This makes the audience fear black males.


The music video used lowkey lighting throughout this connotes that the video will be about a negative topic and the mood of the music is quite, the lighting showed many shadows in the background by throwing areas into shade while a fill light or reflector may illuminate the shadow areas to control contrast. It created an  chiaroscuro effect.


There were many people in the music video, there were different types of body language and expressions being used. Symbolic codes were shown in the music video with their body language, as you can see each persons body language in the music video looks as if they don't care about society and the law and also that they pitty the police. Each persons emotion in the video was serious and  blunt. Krept and Konan showed many different types of hand gestures, the use of mise en scene on the hand gestures connotes that both the artists are involved in gangs.


The setting of the music video was outside round council house flats, the use of mise en scene for this setting connotes that the people in this video are less wealthy than others. The video makes the audience feel as if most trouble and crimes are caused round council estates, giving the audience a negative opinion of black males who live in estates. Also there were shots showing the local corner shops and outside basketball courts at the park, the use of mise en scene connotes that they are filming around their area because there are so many people there that look comfortable. 


At the start of the music video it shows a long range establishing shot round central London, the use of mise en scene on this shot this connotes that the video is going to show a lot of shots of the city life also it connotes that their proud because it looks like their showing it off in their glory. Also there many slow motion shots of  motorbikes doing wheelies this is another example of the 2 artists trying to make an impact with the video through out.




Narrative

The video starts with an amazing establishing shot showing of London for about 10seconds then it begins by showing slow motion shots of motorbikes performing wheelies and slow motion cameos of the Artist's and their group of friends/crew. Then when the beat finally drops the video shows various shots of different places of where they filmed, this makes the music video look more interesting and exciting. The movement made by the two artists gives them an image of being the villans of the music video.

Genre 

The genre of this song is Urban U.K rap, you can tell this from the tempo of the beat and how its organised. This music video shows many generic themes with the use of the props and hand gestures, we know this because U.K rap has a bad boy/ rebellious style of genre. As we can see in the video there were many rude hand gestures shown on the screen this is a form of disrespect and rebelliousness towards the viewers. Also the video shows many intimidating shots of the crew members and the artists this links back to the generic themes because the artists are trying give off the image of a badboy it is aslo a form of "keeping it real".


Institutions
The institutional source of the text is the two artist's themselves, this is due to fact that both artists want stay with their own independent label, this is because both artist like the motto of keeping it real. 

Audience
The target audience for this music video and whom it is addressed too would be teens and young adults, but if we were talking demographically the target audience would be the groups D/E. Basically meaning people such as:


  • Semi skilled workers
  • Unskilled workers
  • The unemployed 
  • Students 
  • Pensioners
  • Casual workers
However if we were to chose a type of audience psychographics it would be ASPIRERS who seek status, materialistic, acquisitive, orientated to image and appearance of personal fashion, the believe the packaging is more important than the content, this is mostly younger people.
I believe this sort of music would attract more of the black race because they can relate to the stereotype.


Shep


  • In my topic i will be focusing on the Channel 4’s Top Boy reflect modern representations of black men in British media
  • In my topic i will be talking about why


Issues/Debates
-Representations and stereotyping

stereotypes are made on a regular basis due to the things that people see within the media, some stereotypes are negative and some are positive. However in this case the stereotypes used against black males is negative, such as



  • Black males are violent and unfriendly 
  • Black males are usually caught up in drug selling 
  • Black males are are unwealthy people who live in council estate flats 
  • Black males are usually caught up in gang crimes and criminal activities
This creates a moral panic within the media meaning that the younger target audience will be influenced to do the bad things they see in the videos, this will make people believe the stereotype even more if they see youngsters doing the negative actions in the music video. The way black males are represented effects them financially because people assume that they act how they how the are presented in the films and the videos so its harder for them recieve jobs nowadays.   

Theories






Research plan (media texts, academic texts and websites)

Media texts
Toboy (TV progame)

Other media texts
  • Adulthood
  • Shank 
  • Anuvahood 
  • Kidulthood
  • Krept and Konan - Dont Waste My Time   
TV documentaries
Academic texts/books 



Internet Links

Secondary Text





I will be analysing a scene from the series of Luther 

[series1/3 : episode1/6] 7:53


Firstly the scene uses a lot of lowkey lighting throughout, you can see Luther's emotion in the scene is very depressed and stressed you can tell that he's been through a lot, the lowkey lighting connotes that this T.V programme is has a serious vibe, the lowkey lighting compliments the mood of the episode excellently because you can tell that the mood is unhappy and discouraged .

Each characters clothing looks very smart, most characters are either wearing a suit and tie or wearing jackets. Each character is dressing smart thoughout the episode, this is because they are acting the roles as police officers. However the main character Luther is also wearing a suit a and tie but his clothes are look rough and out of place. The fact that they made the only black male character look the messiest connotes that the T.V programme is complimenting the stereotypes of black males. The smart clothing of each character working with Luther connotes that they have a job that contains a high status in society.

The line up of actors is this episode is very ironic due to the fact that most of the characters have white backrounds the main character is a black male. This is unusual because you never usually see a black male as the main character in a English T.V drama. You can tell from watching the episode that the police team respect and love for Luther, most of the actors ont he police team act like they need him to solve most of the cases. This connotes that Luther is the best for the job and the staff he works with think very highly of him. This is complimenting the fact that not all stereotypes about black males are true becuase a black male is the main character of a London City Drama.

The setting of the episode contains shots of broken down houses and buildings that look very old, the use of mise en scene from these shots shown connote that the setting of this episode is based in the the poor urban parts of  south London; you can tell by the way they used a wide shot of the both building in 8:11 of the clip. Everywhere looks deserted and unwelcoming, this connotes that the drama you will see in this episode will contain urban London scenery.

The sound used in this scene was dietetic sound. You can tell by the way the sound comes from the word of film that we are viewing, the sound includes dialogue by characters in the scenes that comes from a source we naturally expect.

There are many shots used in this episode. The first shot i noticed was exactly on 7:53; it was a over the shoulder shot done from the woman perspective, this was one of my favourite shots in the scene because of the way Luther was presented; as you can see he is sitting down on a lower level to the woman he's talking too. From viewing the emotion of Luther's face and the height he was sitting at from the over the shoulder shot, this connotes that Luther was going through a hard time at the moment and he needed some guidance in his life, you could even say he looked lost. Secondly the episode uses a medium shot of the woman and Luther at around 8:39  showing the front and back of their bodies whilst walking to the car. In this shot Luther seems to have received the guidance and help he was hoping for because he got his job back, it looks as if the level of height that he is presented in connotes what type of mood he felt in this episode. Another over the shoulder shot was shown at 8:51; this shot was one of the important shots for me to analyse because it showed the level of Luther's status when he got his job back. You can tell his level of Luther's status is high when he meets the character called Justin Ripley, as you can see from the over the shoulder shot Justin Ripley looks powerless compared to Luther, you can liereally feel that Luther power is highly superior compared to Justin Ripley. This connotes that (from the angle this was shot at) Justin Ripley had just joined the force and that he wansn't as experienced as Luther. Various close ups were shown in the car when Luther and Ripley and Luther first met to showing both characters emotions on how they feel about it in the car, these close up shots connoted that Justin Ripley was excited to work with Luther. Furthermore Many wide range, long range, medium shots, and close ups were shown throughout the two minutes of the episode.  






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